An attempt of a vintage ad

I love vintage advertising from the 40s, 50s and 60s.

I have tried an attempt on hosiery advertising with those lovely nylons and those great sandals.

And as always...critics, please!

Mary Anne

Very stylish!

Excellent copy-editing and design. Well done!

Another try.
How do you feel it?

Very good.

Very subtle.

Gorgeous pics in the first place, great subtlety in the second, well done,
Helen

I missed these when they first appeared. I like the images and, to echo everyone else, your sense of design is terrific.

The only negative I can see: the script text on the first ad was hard to read. Maybe a different (or larger) font, or maybe just needs higher resolution.

Excellent copywriting, selection of font, and selection of picture. These look like scans of long-ago real ads.

I hate to disagree with Amanda, but I had no trouble reading either ad.