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elle123
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#1 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 10:36 | Edited by: elle123
 

some captions
elle123
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#2 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 11:17 | Edited by: elle123
 

MY MAKEOVERS


elle123
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#3 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 11:20 | Edited by: elle123
 

Scott and Tonys lives were never going to be the same again
elle123
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#4 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 11:54 | Edited by: elle123
 

more than he bargend for
bdogg75
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#5 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 15:10
 

those were awsome esp #3.
Dichotomy

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#6 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 15:18
 

for some basic constructive criticism, I would get someone to grammar check before you post. Also, punctuation is very important. Still, lots of promise :)
elle123
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#7 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 16:43 | Edited by: elle123
 

me being fucked as a 3D girl. would you fuck me?
Mavra

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#8 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 19:13
 

Uh, sounds interesting. Got links?
Dichotomy

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#9 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 19:48
 

what happened to the pics? O_o there were picks here.
joangel

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#10 | Posted: 25 Apr 2010 03:05
 

Had been working on a similar Alice in Wonderland idea...

http://tgcaptions.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/alex-in -wonderland/
AnneOniMouse

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#11 | Posted: 25 Apr 2010 09:04
 

Yes, have to agree that the whole Alice in Wonderland them can be inspiring of TG variation. My take on it is here
Britt2007

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#12 | Posted: 25 Apr 2010 09:17
 

Did I miss something here?

Britt xoxox
zeemeerman2

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#13 | Posted: 25 Apr 2010 13:35 | Edited by: zeemeerman2
 

I don't get it... No full sentences, spread at multiple posts... ???
GreatSage

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#14 | Posted: 25 Apr 2010 14:06
 

Looks like the pictures got taken down - any idea why?
Dichotomy

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#15 | Posted: 25 Apr 2010 19:12
 

Really you need to get someone to proofread these, the quality could be improved dramatically simply by adding proper punctuating and editing for proper flow. Out of curiosity, what is your first language?

Other than that, I would say that you really don't need to spell out everything for your audience (As in drugged) your audience is plenty smart enough to fill in the holes, and it's much more fun to read if you can fill in your own specifics, not to mention how much unnecessary exposition cuts into the flow.
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