Nice work, but ditto on Trita's comment --
Tristra:
advise against using yellow for a font color
There is something to consider. Browse the site and you'll notice that much of the content is recapped drawings, cartoons, renders, etc. Unless I've missed something there are very few if any any single panel 'live shot' captions like yours, except for what's in "Mod Panels" and "Photo Comics". I have about 375 'live shot' recaps in my library, but have made a practice of posting them on my Yahoo account instead of here.
I guess you have to discuss this with Femur and determine how your work fits into the scheme here. You might even warrant a whole new category!
Best wishes!