Looks like I didn't screw up too much posting that first modified image, so here's another. After posting my two recaptioned comics stories here at TGC, femur sent me the pages of another story he thought might be suitable for modification. They were, and I dult modified the first page - the one with all the set up on it, then never got round to doing the rest. Story of my life, really. It's amazing to me that I ever actually managed to complete three dozen stories and post them at FM (of course, there's almost another dozen sat around unfinished on my hard drive). Anyway, here's the first page of that story. Consider this a taster/teaser....