Thank you all for your kind comments.
On second thoughts, I agreed with Seuzz
that Body Crime is a more appropriate title where the actual body or identity theft is
the crime, and decided to make Pilot Error an Altered Fates cover (For those who came in late, the only changes are the title text and the date/number to keep my issues straight).
What I meant about "clear enough" was simply if I was getting the story over. The original cover
forced me to use a rather large red "banner" (if that's the correct term), so I was naturally tempted to add text to fill in the background. I chose to try and tell the story through dialogue instead, but then started to second-guess myself.