VAINGIRLS: #186 - 190

#186 - I'm not really into the Marvel or DC superhero comics, so hadn't looked at their covers much till SRUwizard's superheroines theme inspired to me to examine them. Thanks SRUwizard. My hero(ine) here really isn't a superhero, though, just a disillusioned fraternity pledge wanna be.
#187 - This one was made from a get well card and was inspired by all those stories where the feminizer says, "We can do this the easy way or the hard way!"
#188 - this was inspired by Anistasia Allread's serial story "Kamp Kumoni" found on BC. Thanks Anistasia.
#189 was also inspired by a story, but I can't remember the title or author.
#190 - I made two versions of this one. I tend toward too much text, and I thought, after I had done this cover with two thought bubbles, that that might be the case, so I redid it with only Missy's thoughts visable. I'd like some feedback on which version you viewers think works best.

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Too much?

The two word balloons on #190 don't bother me at all, I like it either way. You do get a different effect from #190B than you do with #190A, but you can go with it either way. I think I like #190A best because you get a much better feel for the wife's character, thou #190B has better shock value.

The real problem I have with the #190's is the caption at the bottom left that describes Missy's previous male self, a 'handsome 25 year old bank CEO'. This raises the questions of how a 25 year old became the CEO of a bank, and more importantly how old is the wife that she could have a 13 year old 'daughter'. That description should read '35 years old' I think.

Another nice set, Jezzi. I like 189 especially; Not every T-girl needs to be a teenager or 20-something sexpot.

As regards 190...

As a charter member of the "Too Much Text" club, I sympathise. I think both versions work, but I think 190b is better. On the whole, I think the oval balloon in the bottom left corner is the bigger challenger in the "Wall O' Text" stakes.

For me, the new girl just looks too old and much too "well developed" to be a credible 13-year-old, and more like (perhaps) the wife's "little sister".

Great set, as always, Jezzi.

I think #190B works better, with less text. In general writers tend to write too many words, so it's always important to cut as much as possible without losing the core message.

Also, I agree with Andi: no way that girl is 13 years old. In fact, she's gotta be at least 25. :-)

Amanda