#3 | Posted: 17 Feb 2008 17:20
I liked all three, but felt "Don't mess with this woman!" was a bit confusing. The black haired woman says, "I didn't turn my husband into a WOMAN ..." and I read that text first. It made me think the story was going to be a magic or scifi story. But then the title "Homo Heartbreaker" seems to imply that the man is gay and that her husband has not been turned into a woman, that the plumbing is still intact, so to speak. That's why I usually use "shemale" or "gurl" when the change is not complete. |