TGCaps Forums | Polls | Search | Rules/Guide |
Modified Covers TGCaps Forums / Modified Covers /  

VAINGIRLS #116 - 120: The Next Generation!

Jezzi Stewart

TGCapper 

#1 | Posted: 16 Feb 2008 10:34
 

#116 I already posted with AndiJF's "Confessions of the Crossdresser" -"Good News, Bad News!", as a sequel.
#117 - I was reading Newsweek and came across the phrase "agent provacateur" I liked the sound of it and found a "Millie" cover to work it with.
#118 - another one inspired by something Vickie Tern wrote.
#119 is part 3 of the "Girl vs. Gurl!" series; part 4, the conclusion will be in with #121 - 125
#120 - I discovered Barbie Comics covers - sooo many possibilities! This one was inspired by a story I read a long time ago at Fictionmania.
It took being a boy again!
It took being a boy again!
Ironic, isn't it, that the Doc forgot to add the memory loss ingredients to the drug.
Ironic, isn't it, that the Doc forgot to add the memory loss ingredients to the drug.
Tits on the chest may be quite feminine, but revenge is a gurl's best friend!
Tits on the chest may be quite feminine, but revenge is a gurl's best friend!
Hope springs eternal!
Hope springs eternal!
Your classic Brain to Bimbo wife's revenge story.
Your classic Brain to Bimbo wife's revenge story.
AndiJF

TGCapper and Moderator 

#2 | Posted: 16 Feb 2008 17:06
 

"Top job!" as we say down here, Jezzi. On 118 and 120 particularly, you created excellent matches between storyline and cover image.

"Agent Provocateur" is good, but has the same issue with the speech-bubbles as my own "Flirting With Disaster" (which I should re-do one day). We are accustomed (in the "West" at least) to reading pages from left to right and from the top downwards, so generally the "first speaker" should be on the left so that we read their speech-bubble first. In Agent Provocateur, we read the punchline before we hear the joke, as it were. I confess that I didn't wake up to this issue until Femur-sensei pointed out the problem with my first Reality Flux cover, "The Return Of She".

Horizontal flipping all or part of an original image can allow the speech-bubbles to run in a more natural order, but watch out for mirrored text, clock & watch faces, the positioning of buttons on clothing, and other inherently "handed" features.
Jezzi Stewart

TGCapper 

#3 | Posted: 17 Feb 2008 17:05
 

How's this, Andi. I had to modify it somewhat to make the flip work.
improved (hopefully) flipped version
improved (hopefully) flipped version
AndiJF

TGCapper and Moderator 

#4 | Posted: 17 Feb 2008 18:39
 

I'd say a definite improvement. :)
Jezzi Stewart

TGCapper 

#5 | Posted: 17 Feb 2008 20:17
 

I just found the story that inspired me to do #120 . "Beach Bunni" by Kimmie Oh; it's at Crystal's Story site.
barbiedal

Member 

#6 | Posted: 20 Feb 2008 11:19
 

Your vaingirls covers are truly amazing. Can't wait for the next round. Keep up the great work.
Kisses
Barbie
sguffee
Member 

#7 | Posted: 21 Mar 2008 00:31
 

Fantastic, more please.
Modified Covers TGCaps Forums / Modified Covers / VAINGIRLS #116 - 120: The Next Generation! Top
Your reply Click this icon to move up to the quoted message
 

 ?
Only registered users are allowed to post here. Please, enter your username/password details upon posting a message, or register first.