Ah Femur, your cover-fu is still the best! I knew there was something "not quite right" about "The Return Of She", but I wasn't sure what it was. Oddly though, I was
thinking about the natural order of "reading" a comic page, and its associated speech-bubbles when I threw together my cheesy Spectrum Angels picture
. I suppose one should arrange the dialogue so that it reads from top-left to bottom-right (outside Japan anyway).
Suffice it to say, I think this new version looks much better. BTW does the Herculanum font in Dr. North's dialogue "work", d'you think?